in literacy we are doing recounts, we make 2 paragraphs here is one I made
Must haves:
- Correct capitals and full stops
- A separate paragraph for each event
- 2 events
- 100-200 words
Event 1 = weekend
Event 2 = Thompson park
In the weekend My Dads friends came over to watch the rugby then they were drinking in the garage. I walked in then my Mum said “I’ve won 5 games of beer pong in a row I’m unbeaten”. then I had a game with her and won, it was close, my brother and I had a game too he won that one. I went upstairs and played Geometry Dash on my phone.
On Monday Zac.M, James and I went to Thompson Park we made a game that James is a killer and we run away from him. I was very sneaky and jumped over high objects and landed silently. We hid under a platform and acted like we were a dead victim and when he went away we ran to the flying fox and hung off the side of the platform by our
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